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Sunday, 15 December 2013

Story idea 1

Story idea number 1

Genre: Drama/romance

Beginning:
My film will be set in a scene hospital. The main character, she will be standing in the corridor confused, as the camera will spin around her as she stands still and all the background sound will go blurry. I then want her to be sat in a room as the doctor is checking up on her asking her how the scar happened on her forehead, she then starts crying and says ‘am I going to be okay?’ and the doctor assures her that for now everything is fine, but she needs to keep away from any depression and stress or else it’ll speed of the affects. I don’t want the doctor to say too much as I want there to be a little cliff hanger. The next scene will then show her walking out of the hospital and getting into the taxi but then she realises she’s left her purse in the toilets in the hospital so she rushes back in to the hospital collects her purse and as she walks back out through the revolving doors she gets stuck and all of a sudden her emotions come out in anger and fury as she screams in a loud tone then she feels a hand reaching for the glass door and the door continues to spin, she turns around in surprise as she didn't expect anyone behind her. As she turns around the look at the person she feels embarrassed instantly as she realises it’s a guy and his face expression is startled, she gets annoyed and also takes her anger out of him by saying ‘what are you looking at for god’s sake!’  And she walks out and see’s that the taxi isn't there any more so she walks off furiously as the guy is astounded by her and he just watches her walk away in anger which he finds amusing.

Middle:
After a couple of days later the incident, she visits her friend called Tessa and coincidently bumps into the same guy she screamed at, and she starts blushing, she asks him what he’s doing here and he says ‘I’m working in this building, I’m a builder’, and she apologises for screaming at him and he asks her if he could take her out on a date and from there on they fall in love and they get married a couple of months later. They both feel like they’re complete, until she experiences a little confusion, which she doesn’t show to him as she thinks she’ll get better. But after visiting a doctor she finds out that her dementia has gone further then he thought it would have. She feels distraught and hopeless as the doctor tells her the stages that she will be going through from now on. She feels like she has no option but to leave her husband. But it’s too late as her illness gets worse quicker than she thought. As days go by, she feels like she has no option but to let him know, and when she tells him, he gets angry and really devastated as he knows she won’t get better. But he tells her that no matter what he’s not going to let her go and that he’s going to be there till the very end. But when her family finds out they don’t appreciate him hiding her illness away from them. Everyone’s becomes violent towards each other as they argue about her living with them.

End:

As days go by, he starts to become more paranoid about her, so he hides everything in the house that can be danger for her, but that doesn't stop her. While he’s at work she’s at home cooking, her brain switches instantly so she forgets that she has a knife in her hand, but just as she’s about to stab herself the doorbell rings and she walks up to the door with the knife in her hands and when she opens it to see her parents, she realises when she was about to do and her parents see her so helpless so they pack all of her clothes and take her away. When he gets back home to not find her there he becomes furious and calls his wife’s parents and but won’t tell him where they've taken her. Eventually he finds out after a couple of weeks later and when he goes walks in to her room, he finds her in a weak crumbled state in her bed sleeping. As he reaches out to touch her hand she wakes up and looks up at him like she doesn't know him, he tells her who he is, but he realises that she can’t speak either, he feels emotionless. He realises that she’s bed bound, so he picks her up and carries her out but as he walks out the house her parents start yelling at him and they tell him to leave her where she belongs, but he ignores them and stares at her eyes in his arms, and he realises for a split second the shimmer, she remembers him. He smiles at her fighting the tears, but all of her sudden she stops breathing and collapses in his arms, everyone cries in terror. After a couple of months later he visits her at the graveyard for their anniversary, and it finishes when he leaves the red roses on her grave and tells her that he will always love her.

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