Story idea 2
Characters-
Ellie
Tom
Annabel-mental girl
Ellie's mum and dad
Beginning
A young girl named Ellie is home alone. She turns on the news to see a report about a girl in the local area who's escaped from a mental hospital. The news reporter warns everyone in the local area to keep their doors locked and if she is spotted contact the police as she is VERY dangerous and mentally unstable. The reporter begins to interview an officer from the local mental hospital. Ellie leaves the TV on, picks up her mobile phone and peers out of the window. She phones her mum " Mum, what time will you be home? I've just been listening to the news and there's a young girl who's escaped from the mental hospital and its all over the news. They're telling everyone to stay indoors and lock their houses and I'm scared. How long will you be?". We hear Ellie's mum on the other end of the phone, she sounds calm and composed " Oh Ellie dear, you do panic don't you! You have no reason to be scared just make sure the doors are locked. Me and your father wont be coming home tonight, we bumped into some old friends and we're heading into the city for a few drinks and a catch up. If your hungry order some food, there's some money in the tin in the kitchen. I'll see you tomorrow. Night" Before Ellie can even get a word in, her mother has hung up. Ellie throws the phone on the bed and reluctantly heads down stairs. She appears scared. She sets the alarm, turns off the lights and runs back upstairs. Time passes and Ellie is laid on her bed on the phone to her boyfriend. A loud bang is heard from downstairs and Ellie beings to get scared, following the bang, the alarm sounds " front door open, back door open, garage open..." Ellie picks up a vase from her bedside as a form of protection and heads to the landing and peers down the stairs. Behind Ellie we can see a girl dressed in a long white gown with blood splatted on it and she's holding a knife.
Middle
Its the morning off Ellie's funeral and everyone's distraught about her death. We find out that the girl from the mental hospital killed numerous people the night she escaped and has still not been found. She has killed a person every night since she escaped and has not yet been found. Ellie's boyfriend Tom is determined to find and kill her. He thinks she shouldn't be placed back in the mental hospital and get away with murdering all those people due to her being 'mentally unstable'. Tom begins to do some research on the girl and find out more about her past and her family and why she was put into the mental hospital. He finds out that as a young girl she was abused and mistreated by her mother and father. She was beaten badly everyday. One day she came home from school and has suffered enough to the point that's she flipped out and killed her mother and father. At the court trial she was diagnosed with mental issues and deemed mentally unstable when the murder took place. She was sectioned to a mental asylum for the rest of her life where she would receive help.escaped from the hospital. Tom did more research into the people she has killed. He finds out that Annabel is killing young girls and boys who are left alone in the house in the local area.
End
Tom plans to stay home alone in order to set a trap for Annabel. A few days pass and more children have been killed. Its night time and Tom is home alone, he hears a noise downstairs and picks up a knife he's been hiding under his bed. He goes downstairs and confronts Annabel. She laughs and tells him she's killing all the children as a favour, there parents have left them alone and unless they're killed they will suffer a life of misery. She appears threatening and unstable. She smiles and says 'thank me later' and raises a bloody axe above her head. Tom pulls out the knife and stabs her in the stomach. She drops the axe and collapses to the ground. Tom runs to the phone and calls the police. A few minutes later the police arrives and Tom runs outside. "She's inside, QUICKLY". Tom and the police officers run inside to where Tom stabbed her and where Annabel lays. Although, she's not there. All that remains is some bloody footprints which leads to the back door.
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